The first draft of my dissertation has been handed in using the Turn It In submission method on eStudio. I have a few thoughts on my first draft;
Firstly. There is still much to be done with the writing, I'm very aware that it is not at the quality of writing that I am aiming for. I also feel that quotations in the piece needs to be reviewed. The beginning is too heavy is quotes, whilst the latter half is quite light - this needs to be balanced out with them also being triangulated arguments, to hammer home my points.
The bibliography needs to be organised into alphabetical order as whilst writing I was noting down the sources as I went, rather than the order they should be.
Finally, the conclusion and introduction need to be fleshed out, however I wanted to wait until the final CoP lecture about concluding dissertations before I did so myself. The reason being that I'll undoubtably find some important tips with the lecture.
My next steps;
Reviewing, reorganising and completing.
Here is my first draft, should it need to be viewed:
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