I presented my work thus far to my peers. I filled in a Practical Response Feedback form before hand and there are a few points to talk about before going further. Firstly, I've decided that providing it can be arranged in time, I'd like to bind my final piece in hardback form. This will give it a more professional and quality feel. Secondly, I have proposed a series of portraits which will be based on the characters I'm working with. Whether these portraits come to light depend on how well my theoretical work moves forward.
Now onto the feedback. The zine was very well received, and I am hopeful that the same will be said at Thought Bubble in a few weeks time. The work within the zine shows evidence of development but not as extensively as I'd like. I need to actively spend some time developing my characters, playing with a few different medias tools etc in my sketchbook. However my peers informed me that the synthesis between my theoretical and practical work appears to still be strong.
The portraits, my peers informed me, whilst a good idea, aren't as strong as my zine, so I should definitely keep that as proposed outcome and focus on my comic strips.
Here is my Practical Response Form and the Crit Feedback sheets:
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